They reached Hagrid’s hut next afternoon. By the time they reached that place, they were all so tired that they went straight to the dormitories and slept. The cup was still with Harry. He kept it next to his pillow and slept. It was then that he saw it, another vision of what Voldemort was doing. He was in the ministry of magic. There was Cornelius Fudge there along with some officials and a few death eaters. Harry was again, Voldemort. Voldemort said, ‘Wormtail, how many times you want me to forget your silly mistakes? If you hadn’t helped me in my rising to power I would have killed you long ago.’
‘I – I am s-s-sorry m-m-master.’ Said the panic-stricken Wormtail who was lying on the floor.
‘Wormtail, do you now don’t like to serve your master?’
‘It’s n-n-not like th-that master’
‘then what is it? Are you worried about that potter boy then?’
‘master, he saved my life once’
At this Voldemort’s anger was at it’s peak. ‘Fool! He hissed. Why didn’t you told this to me before? You are in Harry’s debt. I can’t keep you with me anymore. Wormtail, you have to die. I will have to kill you.’
Harry was astounded to see what Wormtail did, he had expected Wormtail to beg, plead for dear life, but wormtail stood up, still quiet insignificant and said, ‘Then I wish that I give my life willingly so that my sacrifice can help bring your end.’
‘Fool!’ Harry Hissed. ‘No one can kill me. I am immortal’
And wormtail, from his silver hand, helt his neck and broke it into two pieces. His held fell down and Harry woke up.
‘quick’ he told Ron and Hermione. ‘we need to destroy the cup now.’
He took out his cloak and went to the headmasters office. There was the Gryffindor’s sword. He took it out of the shelf and brought it Hagrid’s hut, where he had told Ron and Hermione to take the cup. Hagrid and others were waiting for him there. Harry asked Ron to pierce the cup with the sword. Ron took the sword in his hand, he was just about to cut it when suddenly his whole body started paining. He fell on the floor. it was as if he was suffering from the crusiartus curse. There was no ending to the pain. So, quickly, Hagrid took the sword and pierced it in the cup. A loud scream came from the cup which died soon. Even Ron’s pain stopped. The horcrux was finished.
‘There’s just one left’ they were shouting in happiness.
‘well, I have something to tell you’ Harry told them, and he told them about the vision he had. Everyone was confused, but Hermione was immensely happy.
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2 comments:
hi abhi,
u gng ossom . i have nt read 7 th part bt still feeling as it close to original 60 to 70% round off but i want to give u 2advices:
1) dont u think so u hv made ths horcrux very cassual thin? i mean every 1 in ur story know abt it. if u rmbr miss. rowlin did not mentioned horcrux in her all 5 parts nd even in 6 th part wen harry knew a lot she made it relly a horrified thin consrerved to just 2 prople nd yes her., ron too( as u must b knowin how an aurthor words affect readers) as in ur case it is becomin sum thin casual.
2) plz if u r thinkin to kill ny these 3 (ron,h,her) of them then dont do it otherwise their may b 100's of ur readers who r till nw givin it real importance to ur story even more than miss rowlings as it has alrdy been too many months it has released, wont do it ny more nd ll loose the interest nd ll keep believing dat rownlin was the realist nd best. ( sp. the one who r very +vely attached to harry potter series 4m the startin -- can c the impact on me as i m also ur reader nd to check i read ths whole story of urs just today together in 2hrs nd here i am 4 ur feed back.
still its ur book ur decision best of luck 4 it
me swati ( too related to writers family)
Hey.
thanks for your comment and so very sorry for the delay in replying. i was a student back then and had to stop writing to concentrate on me studies... but now that i had time, i realised that i must finsh the story i so badly wanted to tell...
I understant you concern on the horcruxes becoming casual, but I wanted to make horcruxes so sinister that it wouldn't be possible for three kids to destroy it alone. I am not trying to contradict Ms Rowling, just trying to tell a slightly different story. As for one of the three main characters dying... well,
and here is a spoiler, so if you haven't read the complete story then please don't read further...
don't proceed till you have finished the whole thing...
In my original version, hermione was supposed to die. but as i devoloped the story,it became clear that the one to die would be ron. It was voldemort's masterplan, as he knew harry would never harm his friend... but then i realised i couln't do it... I love the trio too much to harm them... so I figured out a way to make them live.
also, there are a lot of typos and gramatical errors in the story. please pardon them. Because I was writing this story when I was also involved with college and other things and had very little time...
thanks for reading and sorry for the delay!!!
Abhimanyu Amoli
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